Friday, February 11, 2011

DIZZY HEIGHTS



My eyes are always teeming
Heart is always weeping
I am alone in the world...
I sleep in my dreams
And i wake up with agony
Standing like a souvenir
Looking up the whitish sky
Beyond the wingless birds
The sky is the limit , trying
to reach  the dizzy heights
If i fall down please !!
please forget me ,Its a 
defeat of a fated animal...
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  1. ente lokamFebruary 12, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    "sky is the limit to reach the dizzy
    heights".the poem is beautiful.
    but sky should be the limit for the dizzy heights
    of hope so that in case you fall down atleast the
    height of the hope will make you to continue from
    half the way or even where you break your journey
    towards the final hope of destination in your life
    ...all the best...

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  2. AFebruary 12, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    enjoyed the poem. though the title talks of a dizzy height, the actual lines sounds a lament from the depth of despair. i see it's an appeal to the heaven to take away the perennial sorrows of the soul.

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  3. TPShukooRFebruary 13, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    Good one.
    But why this much sorrow? why desperation! How blessed we are to live in a wonderful world like this. As you told Sky only is the limit. The world is broad enough.

    Looking for more fantastic scribbles ahead

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  4. F A R I ZFebruary 13, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    Even is feeling loneliness, and pains it is
    afraid of that The dreams of to fly the entire ,
    beautiful world, Is going to fall down like
    wingless birds.

    The lines written was even more simple and
    Beautiful which it feels to think that it was taken from your own pages of life.

    The glory of Malayalam poetry is never lost.
    Then what feeling had Changed to wrote the
    poetry in English?

    Nice, and enjoyable.

    Wish u all the very best,
    --- faariz

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  5. nishad melepparambilFebruary 15, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    no one alone in the world ! how we can live like that ?
    wen we feel bad we all r think like that some time me also.

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  6. ഒരില വെറുതെFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    Nice

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  7. UnknownFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    U r not alone priya. We are always with you.

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  8. nikhimenonFebruary 23, 2011 at 3:42 AM

    good try...

    nikhimenon.blogspot.com

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  9. ജയരാജ്‌മുരുക്കുംപുഴFebruary 26, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    aashamsakal.....

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  10. വരയും വരിയും : സിബു നൂറനാട്March 8, 2011 at 4:23 AM

    Pessimist thinkings always opened the doors for good poetry.
    So just think, write...but no acts.
    Best Wishes.

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  11. Prem Nizar HameedMarch 9, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    Priyadharshini,

    You have latent talents.But the emotions you try to infuse through your words do not give the real impact. "An Elegy from coffin" had some variations of the tenses. Visit Muse India.You can find something there to hone your skill. Please take it as constructive criticism.


    http://museindia.com/

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  12. Sannuuu...!March 19, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    hei na, never say about falling off or defeating....enjoy.

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  13. Sentimental idiotMarch 22, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    ഓരോ മഴത്തുള്ളിയിലും നിന്റെ പാദസരം തിരഞ്ഞു............nice

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  14. Bindhu UnnyMarch 23, 2011 at 5:16 AM

    I understand your urge to express, but sorry to say that the grammatical and punctuation errors detract from the overall beauty of the lines.

    Do take more pains to correct them before publishing. Keep going! :)

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  15. Shaffi RoshanApril 25, 2011 at 2:25 AM

    nice one priya !! keep going !!

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  16. AnuragMay 4, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    Nice, and enjoyable Best Wishes.

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  17. ജയരാജ്‌മുരുക്കുംപുഴMay 8, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    very nice.......

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  18. ജയിംസ് സണ്ണി പാറ്റൂർMay 9, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    In the poetic view it is sinner
    not animal

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  19. മുസാഫിര്‍May 19, 2011 at 1:49 AM

    beautiful poem..
    heart touching lines..
    meaningful quotes..
    but fully pessimistic..

    u know yaar..
    pessimism can do nothing in our life..
    be optimistic in words and works..
    u can defeat d unbeatable in life..
    wish you all the best..


    www.kachatathap.blogspot.com
    musafirvl@gmail.com

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  20. Absar Mohamed : അബസ്വരങ്ങള്‍June 6, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    nice.
    www.absarmohamed.blogspot.com

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  21. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    ദേ...ഞാന്‍ വന്നു...!! :)) ഇനി വായിക്കട്ടെ...!!

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  22. jasmineFebruary 13, 2012 at 1:19 AM

    nice one,,
    http://myselfthoughtss.blogspot.in/
    http://5565665.blogspot.in/

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  23. Philip Verghese 'Ariel'March 23, 2012 at 4:29 AM

    A Well Versed Thought
    Keep writing
    Best Regards
    Philip Ariel

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  24. MusingsMay 27, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    Hello, I'm here the first time now. Read a few of your verses in Malayalam and now this. Is it that poets sing more about agony , sorrow and the lost ?
    However,I like your thoughts put into verses , but here , why give much credence to "fate"?
    Perhaps fate is feted by ourselves. don't you think so ?

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  25. MusingsMay 27, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    Hello, I'm here the first time now. Read a few of your verses in Malayalam and now this. Is it that poets sing more about agony , sorrow and the lost ?
    However,I like your thoughts put into verses , but here , why give much credence to "fate"?
    Perhaps fate is feted by ourselves. don't you think so ?

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  26. SHAMSUDEEN THOPPILJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:27 PM

    Keep writing
    Best Regards
    Shamsudeen thoppil

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  27. GeethakumariFebruary 6, 2014 at 11:26 PM

    Nice ...............

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